I am preparing for the Test of Wrinting English and I want to know what's the best RE-formulation of some sentences that I 've written
Can you rewrite this for me please:
Job is the reason of living of people, once the human appeared on the world, they worked to survive.
I'm sure it will have a better reformulation, can you help also for this:
Secondly, tennage are always irritated by the idea to always ask their parents for some money, their parents too!
So, sorry...
I've selected all the worse-written sentences from my essay
Thank you for your help!
Anonymous
09-17-2004, 08:44 AM
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huh damn you suck !!
Anonymous
09-19-2004, 04:41 AM
Hi,
I’m not an expert and will try only to show my own opinion - no responsibility is taken for the correctness of this information.
To have a reason to do something ?a reason for something.
In your case it should be reason for living
The verb tenses! It seems to be a little bit clumsy.
I guess, you are the German native speaker. You translated a lot of the idioms literally. Use i.e. dict.leo.org to find the right translations.
BR,
Michail.
